Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 7, 2019
The Tacky Tasmanian Devil...
Task Description: In class we researched a piece of nature or a Animal and I chose the Tasmanian devil because me and my mum went to Orana Wildlife Park and I saw them. I know that a Tasmanian devil are known for its screams at night. Please comment any thing that I need to improve on.
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Hi Abby I like your post and you taught me a lot about Tasmanian devils. Next time you could have more of a catchy title. I love Tasmanian devils I think they are so cute. I love your slide. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ella in my next slide I will:)
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