Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, March 26, 2020
The Air
My link
I wrote a story based on a picture the story is on my link. I give my writing a 8 and a half out of ten. Have you ever been to a different country? Let me know in the comments and please give me some feedback.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Abby, I love how you evaluate your work out of 10. I lived in London for 3 years and did a lot of travelling while I was there. My favourite places were Italy and Greece, keep up the awesome work!
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