Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
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Awesome work here Abby! I love Beagles too!I dont own a dog but would love to have one. I love the positive attitude towards your own work. Maybe think about some capital letters in your title? Have a go at making another word cloud with things about Beagles, maybe? :) Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow Abby, this is a really good example of all the things you need to do for report writing. I really love how you've shaped it as a dog. I wonder if next time you could add the correct order of how to write a report? I'm looking forward to seeing your finished report, I'm sure I will learn a lot from it.
ReplyDeleteWell done Abby. Maybe next time you could show a photo of a real beagle next you your word art. I also have a border collie cross husky at my house but I used to have a beagle back in Africa but he lives with my grandparents now in Africa. This looks amazing overall 10/10
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