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Tuesday, July 7, 2020

Best Brownie



Hey bloggers
Yay its the holidays hope you are having fun. So today I made some brownies and this presentation has photos of them and tells you what it did, hope you like it.
Could you please give me some feedback on what I can improve on.
I give this a 10/10 because the brownies turned out excellent I love them.
Did you like how my brownies looked?
Quick Quiz : What was the second photo of and what was the 5th word on the slide 2 starting from "so"?
My Sources, thank you to this web site I got this recipe Site.
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 22, 2020 at 10:45 AM

    Hi Abby. I´m Ashlyn and I am from Ahipara school. I love your brownies they look delicious. Next time you could tell us how you made the. Great job!

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  2. AnonymousJuly 22, 2020 at 10:45 AM

    Hi I am from Ahipara School And my name is Layla. I like that you done something to do on a rainy day. Your brownie is yummy.keep up the cooking.

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  3. AnonymousJuly 22, 2020 at 10:47 AM

    hi Abby I´m Lochlan I like your brownies they look delicious. In lock down I made a vanilla cake hope you enjoyed it.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 24, 2020 at 10:42 AM

    Salaam, my name is Ayana
    I am in Waitemata class at Waikowhai Primary School.
    I like how you told us why you made brownies and who you made brownies with.
    It reminds me of when my mum and I made brownies with ice cream.
    Maybe next time you could add more information like what you used to make brownies.
    If you want to see my blog, go to https://wpsayanar.blogspot.com/
    bye!!!

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  5. AnonymousAugust 3, 2020 at 1:55 PM

    Thank all of you and your comments and feedback hope you have a nice day.

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  6. AnonymousAugust 19, 2020 at 2:50 PM

    kia ora Abby
    I really liked how you didnt make the slide too long.
    This reminded me of when i made brownies similar to yours.
    Next time, you could write more about your brownies and maybe write the steps to making it
    why did you make a slide about brownies.

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